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Conquer That First Draft – Guest Post

 Today’s guest post comes to you from Arshad Ahsanuddin, author of Sunset (If you want to read a gritty, adult answer to the Twilight Saga, look no further!) Enjoy!

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So you have an idea for a book. Time to start writing. Some people would counsel to just sit down and start typing, and see where your muse takes you. This is referred to as “organic” or “seat-of-the-pants” writing. It works fine when you only have a germ of an idea or you’re brainstorming. In my experience, however, a little preparation can make a world of difference in the quality of your first draft, and the degree to which the manuscript has to be extensively revised during the editing process. Others violently disagree with me on this, so take my words merely as advice.

Never write randomly. Always plan an outline, even if you only have a rough idea of where you want to go with the story. Every scene has to have a purpose and a goal to which you are moving toward. It will stop you from writing yourself into corner more often than not, even if the details go right out the window once you start. You should have a clear idea of where you want to go, how you want to get there, and what you want to accomplish along the way. Then sit down and start writing, not before. Your outline will grow and adapt as you proceed. It should be frequently updated as more of the manuscript is completed, and divergences from your initial conception become apparent.

It isn’t usually a good idea to edit your work extensively as you go, because you will probably get bogged down in revisions and never finish your manuscript. The other reason not to edit an incomplete manuscript is that you will be working to unify the themes and structure of the earlier parts of your manuscript based on what you intend to write in the future, not what you will actually write. If your ending veers off in another direction from your initial intentions, then your early editing efforts may become outdated. Therefore, the first stage of editing should only commence once the entire manuscript is written and the structure of the story is complete.

As you write, consider different exercises to refine on the fly what you’re trying to express, so that it comes out of your head more precisely. Keep asking yourself basic questions to keep yourself on point. Does this make sense? Would it really have happened this way? Does this sound like something someone would actually say? Another possible technique is to read what you’re writing out loud. Often language that seems to be fine on paper will reveal itself to be awkward when you actually say the words.

Now press on. Even when you’re having trouble with a particular scene, don’t stop writing, or you’ll lose momentum. Consider letting it percolate in the back of your mind, while you jump ahead in your outline to write the next scene, then come back to the missing text when you’re done. Possibly, the exercise of writing what comes next will make what came before easier to process in your head. It might seem at times like the end seems out of reach, but if you concentrate on working through your outline in a consistent manner, then you have a blueprint that will eventually lead you to completion, and the burst of satisfaction when you finally write “The End.” (Not that you would actually put that at the end of your manuscript. Give the reader a little credit for noticing that there aren’t any more pages.)

Congratulations! You’ve written a book. All the good intentions you had at the start are finally realized and you have tangible proof of the fact that you’re a writer. Most people never start, or they come to a point where can’t think of what to write next and give up in frustration. By having a clear map in your mind from the start, you have avoided this pitfall, and crossed the finish line. Now you may finally cross the threshold into the editing process, from one level of Hell to the next. But that’s a story for another time.

Respectfully,

Arshad Ahsanuddin

LINKS

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Twitter:  @pactarcanum
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Print edition (and video trailer)

Mental Shrillness by Todd Russell – And Why Short Stories Rock!

MENTAL SHRILLNESS by TODD RUSSELL

Website: http://toddrwrite.com/

This collection of short stories, MENTAL SHRILLNESS is a very good example of abbreviated fiction at it’s finest. I’ll get to the book itself in a minute, but first I want to discuss Shorts in general.

Not everyone is a fan of short stories, but I tend to think that has more to do with what readers are used to (printable novel-length fiction) because that’s all Traditional publishers have printed for years. But I can see the tides a’turning, and if more authors of Mr. Russell’s caliber put these collections out there, I think readers will see that shorts are not “lesser” stories, they are just condensed. And much easier to read while your standing in line at the Post-Office.

In fact, writing a top-notch story is arguably harder to accomplish. There is much less real estate involved, and each and every word must pack the proverbial gut-punch. Think of it this way, if you asked to explain something in under 50 words or with a 1,000 word limit, which do you think would be easier?

Now, with that said, not all Shorts are created equal. It’s very hard to tell a compelling, complete story, and sometimes the overall story may suffer. That is not true with this horror collection from Todd Russell. His prose is as cutting and sharp as a scalpel, and he minces no time in drawing readers into his warped world.

Most certainly not for the faint of heart, MENTAL SHRILLNESS explores, in bite-sized portions, universal themes of betrayal, lust, mental illness, undying love and desire, with disturbing finesse.

I was disturbed by these stories, especially Pains in the Glass, Falling In Bobbitt and Death Warmed Over, though not as much as I probably should have been. Instead of personally being grossed out, I was sucked into as a silent observer, very much involved in the stories. I could see them, smell them, hear them- essentially this book played out like short episodes in my mind. I felt more than I read, if that makes any sense.

The last story The Illusion whispered faintly of a specific Nathaniel Hawthorne story to me, but I can’t tell you why without telling you how.  So instead, I invite you to read the story and post in the comments what story you think I’m referring to (explain yourself please as well) and there might be a goodie for whoever gets it right first. I must warn you though, the connection is tenuous at best, and I may be inventing it completely, but I do feel even my imagined binding-thread speaks volumes for the high level of writing in this collection.

The included Author’s notes are damn-near as interesting as the stories themselves, and it’s not everyday that you get to hear the method behind the madness. So, if you feel brave enough, drop a trail of breadcrumbs behind you, grab a flashlight, and enter into MENTAL SHRILLNESS.

Mental Shrillness is Available at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Smashwords.

Co-Authoring Trend on the Rise

 I noticed, while preparing to read the James Patterson book  below, that he had a co-author for this book. This triggered the standard domino chain of synapses firing, and I remembered other Patterson books that were also co-authored. I had to ask myself, why in the world this commercially successful author needed someone to help him write books? This was a question that I had to answer.

After some searching on the net, a little bit of Partypoker, and 1/2 of a blueberry bagel, I found what I was looking for.

POP-QUIZ:

–Is Patterson so benevolent that he grabs an aspiring author up by the shirtcollars, effectively saying, “Here my child! Hitch your wagon to my Star!” while posing for the photogs?

–Has Patterson written so many dang-blasted books that he can no longer grasp that illusive *unique* idea?

–Has Patterson fallen into a deep coma, prompting a greedy agent/ publisher to hire someone to churn out more money makers?

THE ANSWER: none of the above.

Publicity and Money seem to be the key to this mystery.

You see, shrewd Patterson has decided to use his notoriety in conjunction with a struggling writers time. It seems dear Patterson makes the outline, and co-A drafts the first full novel. A round of “change this” or “try something different here” ensues, then out pops a blue-faced spanking new novel a la’ Patterson.

Ingenious really. With co-authors, Patterson can mass produce original books (kind-of) that don’t suck, while reaping in the extrapolated royalties.

Patterson is a man with his eyes on the prize! 

 

***So I wrote thisa while back, and addled-brained me forgot to post it. Still though, I think the topic is one of interest to writers as we see more and more co-authored novels hit the market.

 

 

Alien Abduction? Gov’t Rendition? Or Quirky Interview?

Early this morning I was woken up by men wearing masks, gesturing widly with AK-47′s. They drug me out of bed, prodded me down the hallway and out the front door into a rusted cargo van. Wearing only a Merlot’s T-shirt and yogo pants, I had only my wits to help me out of my predicament.

Soon I found myself strapped to a chair in the middle of some sort of pod, with all sorts of wires and electronics surrounding me. A guy sat off to a table at the side and he fiddled with the machinery as my eyes swept over the room looking for anything that might help me escape.

I noticed a bottle of cold creme and a pack of Alka-Seltzer, but I doubted even McGuyver could have made something out of that, so I resigned myself to the tortures that may soon follow.

You can read what happened next over on Mike Cooley’s Fiction blog!

(****Okay, so I wasn’t *really* abducted. Just needed to throw that out there before someone called my Mom in a panic!)

Writing With A Market In Mind

Can you imagine spending months, maybe even years, on a story, only to find that there is no market suitable for its publication? Even the most brilliant work of fiction can be doomed to the back of a closet, if there is no market for it. You can easily avoid this fate for your manuscript if you give a little forethought to what genre story you are writing will fall into, or to what type of markets will be suitable to send submissions.

First, what genre will the story fall into? Will it be bodice-ripping Romance or lean to the more empowering genre of Chick-lit? Will the basis be Science-Fiction, or Fantasy? Will it be a hard-boiled Mystery, or a fast-paced Thriller? If your story is more ruminative in nature and lacks a strong plot, it may be more suited to the Literary genre.

Certain markets, like Romance, expect certain formats in a manuscript. I’m not talking about manuscript formatting; I’m talking about the standard plot points. For instance, you would write a Romance novel in which the girl ends up alone. You wouldn’t write a mystery in which the whodunit is never solved, although you can write a story like that, but it won’t fit into the Mystery genre, so you’d better write towards another market where the mystery is not central to the book. Knowing the story’s genre will help you keep the narrative and focus of the story within the expected parameters.

Second, what type of market are you shooting for—online publications, print publications, book publishers? This will largely depend on the genre of the fiction, as well as the length of fiction. Generally speaking, as individual market guidelines will vary a bit, anything under 500 words is considered flash-fiction, anything under 10,000 words is a short story, between 10,000 and 50,000 words is a novella, and over 50,000 words is considered a novel (at least with a standard adult novel, writing for children and teens carries much shorter word counts).

The point is, if you know what the market requirements are ahead of time, you can be sure not to deviate too far from the norm and increase your chances of acceptance.

Writing towards a market for future publication options will increase the chances that your manuscript will get published, but for many people it is the act of writing whatever pours from your soul that is the true prize. Yes, considering a market before writing a story can inhibit the creative process and influence what the story turns out to be. At the end of the day, it boils down to whether you must write the story, or that you must write the story that will be publishable.

***I wrote this post a while back, but for some reason never got around to publishing it, so here you go. Even though older, it is still true, even if you plan on Indie Publishing. Not only will defining your market ahead of time help you “focus” the work, but it may prevent you from putting out a book with no market, or a very tiny one.

2012 Writer’s Market

#SampleSunday – Excerpt from Still Life Paintings

In the spirit of Twitter’s #samplesunday, here’s an excerpt from the new short story collection STILL LIFE PAINTINGS. This specific snippet is from the story Abstract  Remembrances

…enjoy!

With an outstretched finger, Kady touches the corner of the painting to see how much it had dried overnight. Satisfied the oil paints are still tacky enough to continue working, she picks up her makeshift pallet, already filled with pasty blobs in every shade of the color wheel, and turns to the mason jar of worn brushes that sits by the window. From the jar she chooses a large fan-brush, runs her fingers over the tip to loosen the bristles, and steps to the waiting easel.

Kady swipes the brush tip over the orange-yellow paint, careful to pick up a trace amounts of the pigment before lifting a larger portion of the white paint as well. She works the fresh paint into the peachy section of the canvas with light feathering motions, creating a highlight where yesterday there wasn’t one.

She flicks the brush tip over the brown paint on her palette, working the darker pigment into the paint below the highlight, rendering a prominent cheek bone. It looks too harsh, too angular, so she chooses another brush from the cracked jar, this one a soft bristled round brush. Careful to keep a light hand, she blends the dark with light, until they flow seamlessly together.

The likeness of a young boy has already begun to take shape, but to Kady the painting is nothing more than abstract shapes and colors. No matter how many times she paints the very same picture, she can’t actually see what it is. It’s like her brain can only absorb a piece of the puzzle at a time and when she tries to connect more than one piece, the whole image falls apart, shattering.

She may be crazy, but she’s not an idiot. She’s heard the whispers about her, she’s seen the sympathetic frowns when people don’t realize she’s looking. She knows that something inside of her is broken, but she doesn’t know what or why. And she has no idea how to fix it, or if she even wants to.

So each and every day she paints until the canvas is finished. Then, careful not to touch anything more than the sides, she hangs the picture on the wall of her room with the rest of the paintings she can’t comprehend. So far, she’s got more than three dozen canvases hanging on the walls helter-skelter around the room. Skinny ones, wide ones, rectangles, squares and even an oval painting.

She doesn’t know what else to do with the finished pictures, short of throwing them away. But given the amount of time she puts into each and every one, that seems wasteful. That, and she also holds onto some small hope that one morning she’ll wake up and be able to see the pictures like everyone else does. One morning, she’ll wake up and things will be different, better.  And hopefully, normal.

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If you enjoyed this sample, you can purchase the ebook at Smashwords, Amazon and Barnes & Noble.

Weekend Wrap Up

So, STILL LIFE PAINTINGS is live! Well, mostly. The smashwords version and the Barnes & Noble, and Amazon versions are all live now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On another note, I will be starting a weekly feature that I’m calling Three- Ways Thursdays. (Get your minds out of the gutter, I don’t mean it like that. Mostly) For this weekly segment, I’m going to do a post spotlighting an Indie Author. In three separate ways, we’ll get to know them a little better.

  1. AUTHOR- I’ll find out a little about them personally, what makes them tick, what their life is like, and also what, exactly, makes them Quirky.
  2. BOOK - I’ll feature one of the Indie Author’s books, and maybe a little commentary.
  3. RANDOMNESS – I’ll let the Indie Author speak for themselves.

It should be tons of fun, and I can’t wait to start with the first post this coming week. I even made a banner:

 

 

 

 

Other than that, it’s late. I’m watching Twister for the ump-teenth time, and I purposely stayed sober all through a pool party today just so I could work on the business side of publishing without gibberish working its way into my hard work later. See, dedication is my middle name.

Well, actually its Victoria, but nobody needs to know that. :-)

How I Write: Secrets of a Bestselling Author – Mini Book Review

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How I Write: Secrets of a Bestselling Author by Janet Evanovich

I read this all in one sitting last night, so it was a quick interesting read. As far as information on how to become a best-selling author, I don’ think that there were any tips or hints that I haven’t seen before. The best parts of this book occured when Evanovich’s humor shined through. It did give a good deal of insight into “how” she writes and “why”, as well as why she changed genre’s midway through her career. Overall, this book was an interesting little look into the mind of a writer, cheez doodles and all!

Margaret Fuller – A Woman Before Her Time

 Born in 1810,  Margaret Fuller  was one of the most influential personalities in early American literature. As a writer, lecturer, and editor of  The Dial, transcendentalism’s premier publication during it’s first two years, Margaret influenced the transcendentalist movement and is noted as being one of the earliest founders of women’s liberation.

Forced through her education by her father, Margaret’s health floundered, but did, in fact, give her a broad knowledge of literature and languages. Margaret held conversation classes in Boston, for society women on social and literary topics. As an ardent feminist, Margaret published her book  Woman in the Nineteenth Century in 1845, which dealt with feminism and its relation to economic, intellectual, political, and sexual ideals. As a forerunner of transcendentalism, Margaret edited the Dial, for its first two premier years, during 1840 to 1842.

Other writers, who were her compatriots and contemporaries, used Fuller as characters in their own novels, so thought-provoking was she. Fuller has been identified as Zenobia in the Blithedale Romance, by Hawthorne and she is easily recognizable as Miranda in James Russell Lowell’s the Fable for Critics. 

In response to her favored Summer on the Lakes in 1843, Horace Greeley called Margaret to New York City, and she became the first literary critic of the New York Tribune. Her Papers on Literature and Art (1846) were later reprinted from her work there.

In 1847, Fuller went to Rome, fell in love, and married the Marchese Ossoli, who was a devoted follower of Mazzini. Fuller joined her new husband in the Revolution and corresponded to New York, describing the situation for Tribune readers. Sadly, while traveling home from abroad in 1850, the ship that her and her family (for by then she had given birth to a baby boy) was on sank off of Fire Island, N.Y.

The entire family drowned. Her incomplete works were later republished by her brother. How sad it is that the world lost a great progressive thinker so early in her prime!

Some of my favorite quotes of Fuller’s are:

-What woman needs is not as a woman to act or rule, but as a nature to grow, as an intellect to discern, as a soul to live freely, and unimpeded to unfold such powers as were given her when we left our common home.

-Humanity is not made for society, but society is made for humanity. No institution can be good which does not tend to improve the individual.

-Men for the sake of getting a living forget to live.

-Nature provides exceptions to every rule.

And while Fuller had such notable published works, such as At Home And Abroad Or, Things And Thoughts In America and Europe, and Woman in the Nineteenth Century,one of my favorite passages can be found in Summer on the Lakes, in 1843, as Margaret so poetically describes visiting Niagara Falls in the moonlight:

It was grand, and it was also gorgeous; the yellow rays of the moon made the broken waves appear like auburn tresses twining around the black rocks. But they did not inspire me as before. I felt a foreboding of a mightier emotion to rise up and swallow all others, and I passed on to the terrapin bridge. Everything was changed, the misty apparition had taken off its many-colored crown which it had worn by day, and a bow of silvery White spanned its summit. The moonlight gave a poetical indefiniteness to the distant parts of the waters, and while the rapids were glancing in her beams, the river below the falls was black as night, save where the reflection of the sky gave it the appearance of a shield of blued steel. No gaping tourists loitered, eyeing with their glasses, or sketching on cards the hoary locks of the ancient river god. All tended to harmonize with the natural grandeur of the scene. I gazed long. I saw how here mutability and unchangeableness were united. I surveyed the conspiring waters rushing against the rocky ledge to overthrow it at one mad plunge, till, like toppling ambition, o’erleaping themselves, they fall on t’other side, expanding into foam ere they reach the deep channel where they creep submissively away.”

Fuller had a certain poetical love of nature, and found the most intriguing ways to paint a literary picture. It is this vivid love and observation of nature, that I am sure help to make her one of the influential Transcendentalist of her time.

FOR MORE ON MARGARET FULLER

Woman in the Nineteenth Century

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Summer on the Lakes, in 1843

 

 

New Cover Art Designs

Life has been kind of crazy lately, but I did manage to finish two new cover designs for works soon to be published. I’d love to hear your thoughts on them!

 

This one is for an upcoming short story release by EMMA SHANE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And this one is for a mainstream short story collection that is thematically linked by “Painting” by Karen Fowler, soon to be released.

Book Trailer for BLOOD CHORD

I wanted to make a video for BLOOD CHORD’s kickstarter campaign, so I spent a good chunk of last night and the last several hours today putting one together. (Okay, and I watched like a dozen Ghost Whisperer episodes at the same time. I like to multi-task!)

I know. It’s pretty terrible. But I was a book-trailer virgin, so now at least I can say “Been there, done that.” Before the book is published, I guess I’m going to have to find someone to remake it for me. regardless, I’d love to hear your thoughts!

***EDIT, I can’t get the stupid video to load here. Sigh. You can see the video on YouTube or over on BLOOD CHORD’s Kickstarter page. Sorry!

Reserve a Copy of Blood Chord and Get Swag too!

I know it’s late out there in cyber-land, but I’m just so excited about my upcoming novel Blood Chord that I had to share a few updates!

First I’ve changed the name from Claire of the Moon to Blood Chord. I won’t get into the reasons behind the title change, but I’ll just say that it was necessary to avoid any confusion with a movie out by the same name.

Second I’ve updated the novels page (see link above) with new cover mock-ups and a sample banner ad. Ignore the watermarks on the images. Once I decide which images I’m going with, I’ll purchase the image and those will go away.

Third, in an effort to pre-sell some of the ebooks, I’ve just launched a Kickstarter campaign for Blood Chord. The purpose is to pre-sell so that I can cover the expenses associated with professional editing, formatting, cover art and modest marketing. Basically, I’ve got a page on that site with all the details from Blood Chord, and sponsors can choose which level of sponsorship that they would like to offer. Each level has various rewards. For example, on one level, you would receive a copy of the ebook. At another you’d get a limited edition, signed and numbered hard copy of the novel once its published. I’m even offering up the chance to name a minor character, and a copy of the original, unedited first draft!

Which brings me to something else I’d like to share. This eveing, after only launching the project on Kickstarter last night, I’ve had several backers contribute, and my campaign is up to $150! ( I should mention that if the campaign fails to reach the goal I pre-set, then the project isn’t successful and I get none of the sponsorship pledges.) So I could really use some help spreading the word! I’ve got 26 days left to reach my target and I’m crossing my fingers!

But aside from that, how great is it that complete strangers liked what they saw of my novels synopsis and cover images that they decided to plunk down some pledges? If complete strangers think my work is worthy, then it’s about time that I considered that I might very well have what it takes. Of course, I’m a sucker for validation, so there’s that.

That’s enough for tonight. I’ll keep you all posted on the developments!

Reading for Profit

Like an artist who is able to sell their work, profiting from books that you would have read anyway is like icing on the cake. Now, profiting can mean many things, but for the purpose of this blog, when I say profiting, I mean that you get something from the time you spend reading a book (other than the pleasure), whether it’s a paycheck, a byline or a global audience.

Have you figured it out yet?

I’m talking about writing book reviews.

If you have dreams of a career in writing, becoming a book reviewer can allow you to sharpen your skills with the printed word, give you a collection of “clips” that can later help you snag more writing or reviewing gigs. Plus, even if the book review site pays little or nothing for your review, they almost always supply you with the free books!

And I can think of nothing I’d rather receive in the mail than free books!

In addition to a little jingle in your pocket and free books, writing book reviews is a way to connect with fellow readers world-wide over shared interests and ideas. And if you are like me, being able to contribute your thoughts about a book is just the coolest, and in some small way, you are helping another writer get god press (assuming you did like the book).

There are numerous book reviewing web-sites out there in cyber-land, and all you usually have to do is run a search for “book reviewing” to get a few good candidates. I have over a dozen reviews under my belt for Curled Up with a Good Book, ranging from non-fiction to literary novels. (See a link to my page at the bottom)

A few other good online book review sites include:
- Bookreporter.com
-FaithfulReader.com (Geared toward Christian Readers)
-Teenreads.com
-Kidsreads.com
-Bookreview.com
-Bibliobuffet.com

Carefully read the site’s guidelines and follow their directions. You may be asked to write a sample review on a book you’ve read recently. Before you write it, browse through some of the other reviews of similar books on the site, making sure you look at the work of several different reviewers to get a feel for the proper format and the tone of the review site as well. Then submit!

Offline, magazines and newspapers usually run book reviews. Try approaching your local paper with an idea for a book column. If the newspaper is small, approach your local bookstore to discuss a cooperative venture for placement in the newspaper. Say that if they provide the book and pay to buy a space in the newspaper (and maybe a little remuneration, if you’re feeling lucky), you will read the book and review it for them. This is a win/win situation for all—the newspaper gets ad money and content without paying for it, the bookstore gets unique advertising, and you get a free book, a byline, and maybe a little dough for your time!

***Note that BookReported.com, Faithfulreader.com, teenreads.com, and kidsreads.com are all part of a larger company, and the guidelines for all can be found at: http://www.tbrnetwork.com/becoming.asp